This sentence is problematic because it’s essentially an advertisement disguised as informational text. To make it suitable for an article, you need to remove the direct solicitation and focus on providing information about the services offered by BFG. Here are a few ways to rewrite the sentence depending on the context of your article:
Option 1 (Focus on the center’s services):
“BFG Fertility Centre in Malaysia offers third-generation IVF services, including [list specific services, e.g., preimplantation genetic testing (PGT), egg donation, etc.]. For more information on their services and to schedule a consultation, visit their website [website address] or contact them directly.”
Option 2 (More concise):
“BFG Fertility Centre in Malaysia provides comprehensive third-generation IVF services.”
Option 3 (If discussing multiple clinics):
“Several Malaysian fertility clinics, such as BFG Fertility Centre, offer third-generation IVF services. It’s advisable to research various clinics and compare their services and success rates before making a decision.”
Option 4 (If the article is about LGBTQ+ family building):
“For LGBTQ+ couples considering family building through IVF, BFG Fertility Centre in Malaysia offers third-generation IVF services. More information on their services is available through their website [website address].”
Crucially, remove the direct contact information (WeChat and WhatsApp). This is inappropriate for a news article or informative piece. If providing contact information is essential, it should be done in a designated section such as a contact page or resource list, and in a way that complies with any relevant advertising regulations. The focus should always be on providing helpful and objective information to the reader.
